OK. I'll check it when i can. Some of your edits I did not do BTW because i didn't agree with them or they weren't necessary. They were really just in the lore section.
Thats okay, but I went to the last page and things like the LD for the Inquistor were missing, and the limits on the cannoness, etc. etc. As well other accurate changes weren't made, like Coteaz's name is still mispelled (Coteaz, not Corteaz)