I pledged my soul to Clippy, the chaos god of Mistakes and here's what I found:
(All in Powers of Chaos)
p 101, right column, 3rd line. an extra big whitespace after the ,
p 102, left column, 10th line of second paragraph, whitespace at the end of the line
p 103, center column doesn't line up with the others vertically (look at the last line)
p 104, center column, Line 23/24 Nur gle is spread across the line break without a -
p 108: Wage of Sin doesn't have a Prow Launch bay listed. Is that correct?
p 109: Center Paragraph doesn't line up at the bottom
p 110: The last sentence "The miasma obscures...." seems to belong to "Miasma of Pestilence" and not "Hives of Nurgle"
p 111: It's not immediately clear that the "Venegeful Spirit" is actually the same thing as the Chaos Battle Barge listed later in the fleet lists later on. Might need some clarification.
p 111: Third Paragraph, left column, line 12.
vengeful isn't capitalised.
p 112: Prow Launch bays are only Strenght 2. Intentional? (It's 3 on Terminus Est and Scion).
p 116: Black Box. First Sentece: Using the forcesof chaos. Needs a space.
p 117: Box, second Paragraph, Line 4: Any ship friend or foe that touches... needs ,, around ,friend and foe,
General: The order the different gods are described (Khorne, Slaanesh, Tzeentch, Nurgle), their Ships are presented (Tzeentch, Slaanesh, Nurgle, Black Legion, Khorne, rest) and their Fleet listes are presented (Tzeentch, Nurgle, Khorne, Slaanesh) varies each time.
It would IMO ease navigation if they used the same order each time and if the Vengeful spirit was presented after the four other ones with the other generic ships.
Sorry for the nitpicking, I used the fine comb
PS: I suck at speeling and spotting tyops, so perhaps somebody could have a look for those too