Oh boy, nice draft.
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Overall I like it although it still contains a lot of errors (as has already been pointed out).
Just a few comments/questions which I hope haven't been mentioned before.
p.8 Resilient Attack Craft
The last part of the example "...because both ordnance phases have already taken place." is confusing. There is one ordnance phase per turn, never two.
p.10 Torpedoes
Please don't do this (see my post in the ordnance thread).
p.11 Turret Suppression
I like the fact that fighter support is now limited by attacking bombers, not defending turrets. But theres a lot of references left in the faq which still mention turrets in relation to fighter support and are now confusing.
Just to make sure:
If two bombers and two fighters in a wave attack a ship with 3 turrets and 3 get shot down, the remaining 'wave' will make [d6-3]+2 for a total of 2-5 attacks? Is this correct?
p.13 Hit and Run Attacks
I don't see a need to allow ships on LO/RO special orders teleport attacks. The rule is straightforward and the fluff behind it makes sense to me. On special orders the ships crew is too busy and its energy is needed elsewhere. It has nothing to do with the fact that its weapon strength has been halved.
In an engagement at close range this change will benefit the side which already has the upper hand (less ships on BFI), is this the intention?
p.14 Example of Ork Rok
Z getting beat up by a Retribution
Seems to imply that I roll 12 dice for critical damage for the first rok and then
another 6 dice for the second. This can't be right.
p.27 Eldar Holofields vs Boarding
I'm still not sure how holofields save against boarding. Once against the boarding attempt in general or once against each hit suffered in a boarding action?
p.28 Eldar Haven Spire
May I endeavor to ask how many hits that shining marble sports?
p.34 Demiurg cutting beam at extended range
That's a nice idea but (in Armada) the beam starts at strength 1 not 0 (has been pointed out before).
I think it would be better with a wording like:
"The cutting beams range can be increased to 30cm by halving its effective strength (rounding
down)."