Hm. The bad stuff first:
- does it make sense to apeal to a planetary governor? If the imperial navy supports a large fleet in your system, capable of exterminatus, why should you apeal to a governor?
- the dark eldar chart has some issues; dark eldar assault ordnance ist 30cm (the chart may be older then armada ^^, no big issue ), but all "slave labor" and "mechanicus servitor" - results doesn't make sense. Humans are unable to reproduce eldar/dark eldar/craftworld eldar technology. We are talking about wraithbone construction here. "pirate base in commoragh" doesnt make sense. There are reasons why the pirate bases are located in the sector and not somewhere else.
If you ask me: Drop the governor, rework the dark eldar table. Maybe the other tables should be compared to the blue book and armada tables (the reason why the eldar tables have no "add a craftworld/dark eldar ship for the next battle" - t is: there where no ships for them when these charts came out, this has changed).
In the end, it is a very good startig point if you wan't to create apeal charts. But they should be read often and very carefully, need some fine-tuning and then you will get something you can use.